As you know I really like the imagery, the lighting and the colours. I feel that this creates an uneasy atmosphere.
What you need to do
1. Add a soundtrack (obviously !). Be careful as you have some really good diegetic sound.
2. Possibly film/add a final scene - but this needs organising quickly. You could have a short final scene with the character interacting, or not, in a public space.
3. The titles need a little more work. You need to add the CANDI ident and think about where you place the credits, for instance I'm not sure if every actor needs a separate credit, some might share a page. Do they all need to be Upper Cas as well.
Do think about extra filming - but you don't have much time left.
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